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Unread 01-02-2025, 09:55 PM
Phil Wood Phil Wood is offline
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Hi Nick,
Just to clarify, my suggestion was to cut L11-12. This avoids the repetition of 'shadows' and the familiar phrase 'shadows dancing'.

Phil
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