I dare you — double dare you — pinky swear me — you'll include this with your next submission as a short biography — Ha!
Such self-deprecation! It's a very hard trait to pull off successfully but you do it here with aplomb
It rolls out so easily in spoonfuls of couplets. The one that had me scratching my head is how your rhyme can be called "down to earth" but then you answered it with the very next line — Each couplet is a smile.
I like it, too, transposed to be in first person. It is, after all, autobiography. But then again, the N is writing about Joe Crocker.
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