Hi John
I also enjoyed the hard-breasted women and the groin-free men. You capture very well their arch poses, the madly camp angles at which their wrists are bent.
As Trevor said “the sneaks” in L10, really jumps out at you. As a noun, in the UK, I associate it with “snitches”. Is that the sense that you wanted? Or are they a posse of sly interlopers?
And I find the final line hard to get the sense of, which is a shame because you attach an exclamation mark to it, so I’m missing something. Humans are lucky because, before night comes, they get to see the light disappearing?
Joe
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