Hi Glenn.
My only question is whether “cried” is the best choice for your last word. How about something more snarky, or threatening?
I thought 'see you tomorrow' was all the menace the cheery little bot needed.
Hi Jim.
Thanks for the re-formatting and corrections. Gratefully accepted.
Hi Jayne.
I think it's quite brilliant!
Oo-er indeed.
Thanks for spotting the typo, corrected.
Thanks all.
RG.
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