Hi Jim.
I'll have you know that my first comment was the most painstaking I've ever made here without a single nit, bit of praise or bombast involved.
I've marked it on my calendar. Are you sufficiently recovered from your heroics?
I'm glad you liked it.
I did.
I hope it goes without saying that my interest meant I liked this from the first.
It did and it does.
Two, what about “DEE…liv…errh…ree... DEE…cline…’d.” or some other way of saying it.
I'm not averse, but aren't caps shouting now, rather than emphasis?
I read "err" as in "to err is human..."
I did worry about that, contemplated a third r and then wimped out.
and the "D" used for the clipped "duh" ending of declined seems off.
Perhaps a Brit/American thing? You (as an American) would incline to 'd?
Incidentally, did you have a problem with it being referred to as both a package and a drone?
Thanks again.
RG.
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