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Unread 01-22-2025, 03:31 AM
Jim Ramsey Jim Ramsey is offline
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Hi Richard,

To answer your question, I did have a small disconnect on first reading over the drone and package being one entity at times, but reconciled it as a matter of the recipient's probably perplexed perception.

Here's something I pulled from the internet:

How to format dashes?
In Windows, press the Alt key followed by 0150 for an en dash. For an em dash, press the Alt key followed by 0151 (you need a numeric keypad). On a Mac, press Option+hyphen for an en dash and the Option key followed by Shift+hyphen for an em dash.

In addition, I think em dashes are what you are intending. Also—I think—there should be no spaces between lettering and dash. When they fall at the place where a line breaks, I've put them both at the end of the top line or at the beginning of the following line. I don't know which way—or if neither way—is correct.

Jim
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