Trevor, thanks for commenting. I have to say that prose comments generally have no impact on me. It’s been thrown around so much as a negative here on a board centered around met poetry that it means little. It’s an opinion. I appreciate your other comments although I’m staying with single stanza for now.
James, thanks for reading and your willingness to sense forces moving through the poem. There is a reason to bring in the novel, for example, and I am grateful you are willing to note that. It’d be great if you came back.
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