I resent being called the "Politically Correct Police," not least because I made no effort to control Jayne's discourse. I just told her how I responded to the poem. That's what we do here, Jim.
Jayne, I too prefer the spirit and tone of the revision. However, I don't think referred woks in line 1. D is asserting there, isn't she?--not referring to anything. Sorry--I know it's a rhyme word.
Last edited by Simon Hunt; 01-28-2025 at 08:45 PM.
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