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Unread 01-30-2025, 11:47 AM
David Callin David Callin is offline
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It's a very nice rewrite, Jayne. (Revision 3, I mean.) Mission accomplished, I would say.

Y'know, there's a touch of "The Phoenix and the Turtle" to your last line.

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David
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