Hello Jayne,
So what I was saying is that I feel that there is so much emotional data to explore for you within this topic, that you could likely keep rewriting the poem to express different emotional emphases or points of view. In my opinion, poems that allow this are the most resonant, because they are really compress a lot of emotionally significant life experience in a short space, so they are sort of bursting at the seems with emotional and metaphorical implications, so much so that it all might not be able to be expressed with just the one poem, though the poem tries.
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