Like Matt, I am having trouble with the meter of the last line. I want to read it as either:
don't SUFFerING feel BETter IN a BRAND new SUIT?
or
don't SUFFering feel BETter in a BRAND new SUIT?
In other words, it's hard for me to promote "in" without promoting "ing." Even if I read "suffering" as two syllables, I still have this problem as I think the rhythm it sets up leads naturally to the second reading.
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