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02-11-2025, 07:51 PM
Rick Mullin
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Hi Jim,
I, too, like the spare treatment.
The second line could use some work. Does the thought clutter space? That would be a hell of a thought! Maybe something about the thought rushing into the all-too-cluttered void.
RM
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