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Revision posted.
I've tinkered with this for the past few days but don't know that I've gotten anywhere better. I've beaten the subject to a bloody pulp and don't know why. It gets me no closer to understanding the nature of words and my relationship with them. It's the rhythm and the repetition that I want to echo my lifelong quarrel with them. They clearly do not love me as much as I love them! Maybe all I'm doing is venting my frustration with my relationship with them.
Perhaps the title should be "Them". I think I'll change it...
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