This Is Where We Came In
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This Is Where We Came In
“It isn’t what I’d call a picture show,
this CGI…AI…it’s all the same,
all bouncing spandex arseholes. Such a shame
we lost the morse code pulse of RKO —
a title card and off! A silhouette
and there’s your man, but doomed you see, some double-
crossing dame, smoking, built for trouble.
— How long’s this flick? Christ, when did they forget
how bladders work? An hour and a half’s a charm...”
Chiaroscuro blinds that hide a hood
throw shadows black as 1940s blood.
A big shot shot – you're cradled in my arms –
cue sirens and ‘The End’.
…………………………….……..…..”I’m tired now, son.
Nudge me when these flying clowns are done.”
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This Is Where We Came In
It isn’t what I’d call a picture show,
this CGI…AI…it’s all the same –
all bouncing spandex arseholes – such a shame
they’re feeding kids this stuff. Now, RKO!
A title card and off! A silhouette
and there’s your man, but doomed you see, some double-
crossing dame, smoking, built for trouble…
How long’s this flick? Christ, when did they forget
how bladders work? An hour and a half’s a charm...
Chiaroscuro blinds that hide a hood
throw shadows black as 1940s blood.
A big shot shot – you're cradled in my arms –
cue sirens and ‘The End’.
......................................I’m tired now, son.
Nudge me when these flying clowns are done.
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Last edited by Mark McDonnell; 03-01-2025 at 12:22 AM.
Reason: hyphen: thanks Susan
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