Hi Glenn,
As you know, I get a lot out of walking my dog too, so I enjoyed your theme a lot. I did balk though a bit at a point where I thought the poem may be too literally crediting dogs with the ability to conceive of God. Maybe I am the one being too literal, though. Anyway, I thought a slight change would smooth my read:
How about:
She shakes with joy, her face aglow
as if she’s thanking God for all
instead of:
She shakes with joy, her face aglow.
I think she’s thanking God for all
All the best,
Jim
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