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I've procrastinated too long this time, and you have done a fine job of leashing (or is it unleashing) the poem to say some things that especially dog lovers like me can intuit.
So I won't stay long except to say you had me eating out of your hand at the title. The inclusion of the word “With” says it all. I must remember to walk with my dog.
You've transformed the original God-centric conceit into something more ethereal and it welcomes me in to walk with you.
Btw, I really like the user-friendly way you've tracked the changes.
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