[Jan Iwaszkiewicz]

Thanks Trevor for dropping by.

The annaphora although faint is meant giving the rhythm that I want.

It is about someone aspiring to the obviously unattainable yet finding the impossible inside himself. It is also the behaviour of the crowd to the different in amongst a couple of other things. It is about the futility of anti logging fighting against big business. One can become the problem and lose perspective.

It is crafted purposely without stanzas and cannot see a rationale for making the language here ‘fragmented’.

I have repeated the title and added the footnote because it does not come up in some searches and being ‘Uprooted’ is apposite.

I appreciate the effort you have put into commenting but I feel your feedback is somewhat arbitrary.

‘clear fall’ is what is left after the woodchippers go through.

I thank you for your time.

Regards

Jan