Thread: Hilarly Biehl, Autmn Sky
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Unread 03-05-2025, 02:14 PM
Julie Steiner Julie Steiner is offline
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Wow. The last two lines are fantastic. I also enjoyed the "something's gone wrong" effect of the slant-rhyming between stanzas. Kudos, Hilary!
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