Susan,
I don't think the stresses are too much of a problem, especially as it's light verse. All of the rhymes vary in their number of syllables, from one to three, and I'm heartened that Harry was OK with it, as he's American.
By the time we all finally get through Customs and Passport Control we're all looking pretty miserable - so at least our awful photos make us readily identifiable!
Jayne
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