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Unread 03-15-2025, 04:02 AM
Mark McDonnell Mark McDonnell is offline
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I really like this, Jan. It has a ringing, elemental strength to it. The last line is great, and ominous.

I can't make sense of the opening line about breasts and it nearly throws me out of the whole poem. If it's referring to Trump's history of sexual assault, I'm not getting the image.

Mark
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