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Unread 03-16-2025, 09:52 AM
Jim Moonan Jim Moonan is offline
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It's hard to break the learned behavior of adulting/avoiding puddles. To answer your question, I do, on occasion, splosh to get a giggle out of my grandchildren as we walk the paths in the park.

I want to think like Mark does that this is a children's poem for adults, but can't quite get there yet. Perhaps my adult defenses are up.

It's neither here nor there, but I wondered about the word "Can" to open the poem vs. the word "Do". I don't know why I even bring it up, but I do : )

I have been accused from time to time of being sentimental and naive. This poem actually calls on the reader to re-engage with their sentimentality and naivety. It reaches back to that sweet spot in time when a puddle was not an obstacle.

I don't mind wet socks. They can be quickly changed. What I do regret is that constant loss of innocence that Blake talks about. I would go back in a heartbeat to be more innocent in my interactions with life. I have no desire to conquer anything. No need to tame the wild world. I would rather head off in the opposite direction and explore the puddles you mention.

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