Hey again, Glenn.
Your explanation of the context opens the door for what seems to me a potentially more interesting angle on this theme: advice from a father to his son after the son's break-up. "Your" would become "her"; "I" would become "you", and "I" could involve new elements from the perspective of the father.
Just an idea. Might not be the direction you want.
Best of luck with this.
Trev
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