Hi James,
I'd urge against changing the title, the close, to me, is pitch perfect (and certainly not lacking in meat.)
Should you feel the need to revisit anything, and you shouldn't, then maybe look again at 'chug' (it's a bit 'frat boy' isn't it, and N seems older than that. Also, it isn't the most pleasing word in terms of sound.)
RG
Last edited by Richard G; 03-24-2025 at 08:36 AM.
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