Hi, Susan—
Lovely triolet. As the titles make clear, the abundance of sensory stimulation in the operatic birdsong, curving “candelabra” branches of chestnut trees, and frilly, fragrant “bumptious” daffodils announces the arrival of spring dramatically. I think I prefer “Baroque” to “Florid.”
Your poem leads the parade of poems celebrating spring that we will see for the next few weeks. As an Alaskan, I say, “Let the parade begin!”
Glenn
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