Hi Hilary,
That makes absolute sense, and no need to apologise. You're just giving your honest take on it. Such a comment should only appear harsh to someone whose ego can't take it, I think.
Many thanks for your feedback.
Trev
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Originally Posted by Hilary Biehl
That's a very vague aim, which might help to explain why the poem feels prosey and generic.
Edit- That sounded harsher than I meant it. I just think maybe there is another way to come at the material, with a narrower focus, some odd (in a good way) angle that only you would think of … hope that makes sense.
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