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Unread 04-03-2025, 04:33 AM
Yves S L Yves S L is offline
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Hello Jan,

I like the repetition of the "bone" rhyme, and you have addressed my issues with your 2nd revision in respect to how you lay out and progress your theme.

Yeah!
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