Hi, Richard and Alex—
Thanks, gentlemen, for your kind encouragement.
Richard—you have been a truly dedicated Constant Reader. I appreciate your time and effort in helping me polish this piece. I took your advice and added “flutter” to S3L4 to expand the hen-and-chicks image. I had to smile at your suggested re-write of S1. In my rhotic dialect of English, “sport” does not rhyme with“astronaut,” “bought,” “taught,” or “caught.”
Alex—I’m glad you enjoyed this piece. I appreciate your positive, constructive, and useful comments.
You have both been very helpful.
Glenn
Last edited by Glenn Wright; 04-07-2025 at 08:17 PM.
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