[Trevor Conway]

Hi Jim,

Thanks for these ideas, as well as your overall thoughts on my style. It helps to get such feedback. I'll have a think about your word choices here.

Much obliged,

Trev

Originally Posted by Jim Ramsey

Hi Trevor,

Here are some word choice options in case you see any merit in them. Basically I am looking to find more concrete images and words that are more specialized. I agree with other comments that you have created a strong scene with depths of meaning. Just for the sake of throwing a thought out there, when I read your pieces, I sense your personal style, your voice. While you explain between the images more than I sometimes think is necessary, on the other hand, you choose subjects and themes that sometimes seem to call for that.

All the best,

Jim