Hi, Roger and Trev—
Thanks for weighing in. This poem is based on a real experience. Had I waited and calmed down a bit, I would not have posted it. Your reactions are very fair and understandable.
I have been trying to work more in light verse. As the actor Edmund Gwenn supposedly said just before taking his last breath, “Dying is easy. Comedy is hard.”
I think I’ll put this one in the stock pot rather than try to salvage it. I appreciate your honest responses.
Glenn
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