[Harry Nicolas]

Thank you Jim, Yves, Hilary, Trevor, and Glenn for your feedback and inputs. This has been a very eye opening and I have learned a lot. I am still trying to find my poetic style which tends to lean more experimental and I think some things I guess you have to live and die by. I will admit I am new to poetry and I am still getting better at knowing the audience you are writing for and I do agree that I have shown a poem I wrote to non poetry readers once and the subtlety that I thought made it artistic they didn't pick up on, which partly was my fault I guess.