I feel I've arrived here at a time when all the hard work has been done for me, and I'm enjoying the benefit of that. Even if I'd been first on the scene I think I would have appreciated it.
The change in scene - as I see it - from S1 to S2 still throws me a bit, but each verse seems like a thing in itself, so that's not really a problem.
I think it works well, Harry. I would even call it charming, if that didn't sound (I expect) a bit patronising. So I like it. Excellent last line. I even think the title works well.]
Cheers
David
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