Yves, pardon me for misunderstanding. I jumped to a conclusion and missed the contrary evidence. I value what you say about rhythm. Rhythm is one thing that can't be taught, and to hear you say you read it here is good music.
Joe, thanks for clarifying the habits of a thrush. I am pleased you like the poem.
Trevor, your comment about language striving too much toward poetics rang my bell. I find that sort of critique valuable, so I'll use it.
Thanks, again
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