Hi Alex
And I feel that with the latest couple more tweaks I've just carried out, it's very close to final state.
Agreed, though not certain about 'prompt' - lacks drama, for me.
Speaking of which, might you consider 'Lethean' for 'forgetting?
since it didn't carry that additional nuance of something threatening and ominous,
I wonder if different word choices might more closely tie the wall and the tide together (the wall appearing as a single wave of sorts.)
RG
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