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05-04-2025, 09:43 AM
Julie Steiner
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A tasty bite-sized package for a bite-sized idea. Nice.
If the poem is titled "Cat tunnel," perhaps things might start with an adapted L3 ("She whooshes straight through"), without mentioning either "cat" or "tunnel" within the poem iat all.
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