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Unread 05-05-2025, 09:51 AM
Richard G Richard G is offline
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Hi Alex.

I wasn't aware "Lethe" could be adjectivized to "Lethean" ... good to know!
Nor was I before yesterday.

I thought I could have a two-for-one by having Eurydice in the "looking back" lines, but it wasn't quite working.
Worth a try. (I'd been seeing Lot's wife.)

So, for now, I've simply replaced "prompt[s]" with "swirl[s]."
No cigar ... yet. (I think it worth chipping away at this word. There are so many possibilities.
To look back would incite/unleash ...
For looking back recalls/invites ...

...)
But everything else seems settled.

RG.
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