Hey alex, here is my interpretation
Night fog - gives ominous/eerie image in my head
4stanzas
Stanza 1 - a man in the woods searching for the N. haze is metaphor for something
Stanza2 - lamp is light to guide is way. Remnants of wings is ambiguous so wings of what -a bird, butterfly, angel, something that flies. Also remnants implies the pssage of time so the wings are archaic and have been decaying for a long time.
Stanza3 - so the N does know the man in the woods.what type of relationship do they have?
Stanza4 - there is a figurative shipwreck. The man watches the n that is a metaphorical shipwreck drift away.
The passage of time seems to be a theme here. Shipwrecks and remnants of wings are things you come upon and I think of what was the ship carrying where was it going, what type of wings/where was the bird (if it is one) going
The haze/mist is a metaphor for something I’m not sure what, maybe something that was clouding/fogging the relationship between the N and the man in the woods.
For me- unless I’m missing something which I probably am, I think I would want to see more stanzas developing the narrative, but that’s just my personal opinion
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