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Joe Crocker Joe Crocker is offline
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I also like the "pulsing fist of muscle" but I think that image deserves some more active verbs to go with it eg

I am a pulsing fist of muscle,
sucking blood from lungs,

squeezing nutrients to nerve and bone,
brain and liver.
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