Welcome.
The meter and rhyme are skillfully handled here and moment-by-moment there's a lot to like.
What does and doesn't get passed down, and who is responsible for seeing that it does is a strong theme. I'm not sure the poem has decided how to treat it. The silly-feeling jokes (the pastor line, even the harassment line) feel like a clash with, for instance, the ending.
I'm not asking for answers to any of these questions; I'm sharing them in case it's helpful to see what I'm confused about:
Is it the speaker's grandmother or mother from whom she wishes she'd learned to crochet and knit?
What's the connection between crocheting/knitting and childbirth? The transition between Ls 2 and 3 suggests the body's postpartum healing is like knitting, which I can roughly see. The transition in the second stanza seems to make a different leap.
How can a person harass with questions withheld?
Does/should not having asked make the speaker feel guilty, does she feel an opportunity missed? Or does she, as the annoyance line suggests, feel the (grand)mother wouldn't have answered anyway?
FWIW.
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