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Unread 05-09-2025, 09:41 AM
John Boddie John Boddie is offline
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There are a couple of minor nits to pick, but overall this is a good piece of work.

Does it need to be an "old" car?

"amidst" rather than "in"?

A question mark after "understood".

JB
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