Hi Max and David,
Thanks very much for yere feedback. I meant "guise" to mean appearance, as in he knows what this bird call means, hence he's stirred into action.
I'll look into the sequencing of things, Max. Thanks for bringing that to my attention.
The larvae are the young bees growing in the nest before becoming insects, David.
I'd be interested in hearing whether ye think the form generally worked for this material or whether it felt as though it constrained the poem/clarity overall.
Thanks a million.
Trev
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