[Alessio Boni]

Hi Trevor,

Even Yves said something about the standard 'vibe' of the first three verses in her first comment, that being that were very basic and fulfilling the arch type of 'speaking to a lover'. I agree with you that the first version, and even the second, is not clear at all. I am thinking of deleting them completely in favour of the final one.

What do you think of the final one?

Thanks,

Alessio.