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Originally Posted by Roger Slater
I also think there's not enough here. The same theme/idea was done by Alan Dugan, who put a lot more meat on the bones. Check it out. |
Hi Roger,
As of now, it is what it is, As of later, it may be what it was of was. Dugan's poem, though more elaborate, actually seems to have a narrower focus. On a sassy bluegrassy note, Dolly Parton covered Dugan's same theme in "Nine to Five." My feeling was that this would be all about the title, if it were to stay like it is. Here are some I was considering before the AI search I did (see my response to Trevor) which would be a prompt for many more possible titles:
Initial Impressions
Self-assessment
Analysis
One More Day
Going On
Being
Making Progress
Another Day
Focusing
Date with Fate
Toward an End
Destinating
Searching for the Path
Destination Unknown
Peripatetic
In the Zone
Corporeal
The Body
Purity
Truth
Thanks for giving it a look and nudge.
Jim