Hi, Susan!
Pace Dickinson, I just can't swallow the premise that succeeding as a poet means you know you're nobody. If you were to change this to "Succeeding in translation means you know you're nobody," I'd buy that. But that's clearly not the poem you want to write. Which is fine. Anyway....
I think if you're going to capitalize a personified Time, her personified daughter (and not-daughter) should also have their names capitalized.
Last edited by Julie Steiner; 05-23-2025 at 04:36 PM.
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