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Unread 05-26-2025, 01:46 PM
Hilary Biehl Hilary Biehl is offline
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Thank you, James. In my earlier drafts of part 1, the sun was actually more prominent. It was a casualty of some necessary cuts. I need to think about it more.


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Originally Posted by Matt Q View Post
Hmm, or maybe "they should get home" which (maybe) implies getting there faster / mode directly than they are currently going.
Well, this is what I meant, so now I'm curious if there is really a significant difference in meaning between "they should go home" and "they should get home." I would love to hear others' input on this as well. It would be an easy change.
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