Hello Joe,
"I'm looking at the man in the mirror"--Michael Jackson.
Ralph had a poem in the last few years about an aging N looking at himself in the mirror.
Poems about a man looking at himself in the mirror:
https://www.google.com/search?q=poem...ih=92 2&dpr=1
The poem was dull because the language was flat and prosaic. At least now you have added some musicality back which lifts it quite a bit.
I am still not sure that you are doing all that much with this old chestnut of a theme, though!
Yeah!