Mark, thanks for looking even if it's not your cup of tea. I appreciate your comments explaining your take.
Jim, I’m glad that it’s looking even better to you. Thanks for the kind words on the soundscape. It’s true, it’s one of the aspects I usually pay extra attention to.
Richard, glad to know that this is even better. I appreciate your pointing out specific problem spots for attention. Also, your reshuffling of the lines, especially for more focus on her at the ending is interesting, and I’m carefully considering its potential. But, I think I should let the piece sit a while before any more edits, especially, anything extensive.
Cheers,
…Alex
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