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Unread 08-30-2008, 04:29 PM
Pua Sandabar Pua Sandabar is offline
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Geee, I dunno, Janice.
Like Aunty, I find any and all feedback helpful.

Whether it's a speed-o-light fly-by thumb-up thumbs-down gut reaction, or a line-by-line anaylsis of sound and sense. A punctuation tweak, or the slashing of entire stanzas. A word suggestion, or an A-to-Z rewrite. A grin, a giggle, a pat on the back, or a stern and unmistakable shove in the direction of the nearest rubbish bin.

My favorite, and very likely the most helpful critique ever? One that I received very early on from John Boddie. It started out:

"This piece of doggerel is enough to elicit the gag reflex..."

Ha! Ka-pow! Did I ever work hard after that! In fact, I printed out the crit in its entirety, and kept it taped to my monitor for years!



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