Thread: Villanelle Schnell
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Unread 04-04-2001, 05:30 PM
Jerry H Jenkins Jerry H Jenkins is offline
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MScott,

Your villanelle has three lines too many - it's a 22-line poem trying to fit into a 19-line form. I don't know if correcting this is an opportunity or a curse, but -

Good luck.

Jerry
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