Well Carol: This exercise certainly had you inspired. I was convinced you were reading my email. Stanza 4 in particular made me laugh and laugh. It does go in cycles and I am currently in a "Get your credit restored"/"Increase your penis size" period (hmmm--there must be a link there somewhere).
Two nits:
--2nd stanza. Agreement? "lead"--"on them all."
--3rd stanza. Why not a second exclamation point in that first line?
Otherwise I marvel at your zingy ear and wit. Though I still wanna know how you have been reading my email.
nyctom