If this is impromptu, larisa, then obviously it's a medium with which you are well familiar. As you say, you know where the weak spots are and, clearly, could polish them up with no difficulty; therefore there's little point in putting forward suggestions that probably wouldn't match up to your own ideas.
That said - heel/heal is a homonym, not a rhyme, and void/avoid is the same rhyme-ending, but I'm sure you realise that!
Well done!
Ereme
(p.s. -I love 'Sockhood's flower'!)
[This message has been edited by EREME (edited February 08, 2003).]
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